This is a story about how me (the dragon) and Sivan (the kitten) became friends at cave school. " What a beautiful day to play on the amazing stone play ground" I shouted. " NO !!" yelled Sivan '' I am going to play there." Then she stomped towards me and pushed me over the stones and bark '' OK please do not push people over." I whispered softly "You two stop it this instant" yelled Miss Crocodile "uh oh" we both said in horror "I will tell you both one more time the consequences." said Miss Crocodile. "Step one no play time for one day, step two no play time for two days,step three an apology letter, step four out of cave school. !!!" Sivan and I looked at each other terrified. Both of us knew that our parents would be furious and disappointed in both of us, so we started to play to nice and took turns. Suddenly we began to realise that we had a lot in common and we liked playing with each other. Now whenever we are lonely we have each other.
By Sean
Sean's Dad: Great writing Son, I really liked the wonderful ending, where if you're ever feeling lonely, you still have friends. I also like the idea that a Dragon and a Kitten could be great friends.
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